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It is I, funny typo person, rising from the grave once again to play another one of your wonderful games (I cannot fall asleep and I have uni tomorrow help me)

- "There's so much good you think you can do.", "...home made mac' n' cheese here you come." I think it's supposed to be either homemade or home-made? I'm not quite sure, though. Funny second language stuff.

- "Everything is completely authentic." (That's a multiple choice thingy), "You wait a little bit more before you send more messenges." Messages instead of messenges.

- "The laboratory is named Carpe Diem.", "...but inside it's magnificant." Magnificent instead of magnificant.

- "Pristine white floors shine under flourescent lights." Fluorescent instead of flourescent. Same typo is repeated in "This is the common area.", "It's a long, carpeted area with big...·

- "It's unnaturally chilly.", "If you go left, you'll reach arrive..." Repetitive, it should be either reach or arrive I think?

- "The table is long and riddled with metalic devices..." Metallic instead of metalic. On the same page, "When the charge is produced..." check the "The particles produce weakly interact" line's wording and the indiciating typo at the end of the paragraph.

- Couldn't see my soul in the last part of the maze, for some reason. D:

- "Hands. Paws. Tentacles. WIngs." Random capitalized 'I'.

- "You stand in a world of broken glass...·, "you begin to walk across the crstayl path." Crystal instead of crstayl. (What happened there?? lmao)

- "You are a fool," says the entity.", "It echoes and bounces in the darkness, a low gurttal." (I don't even know what that typo was supposed to be help)

As always, thank you so much for the game. Absolutely loved the amount of variety in terms of choices and culture. :)

Hello!! It is I! Typos I found for this update!

- In the character preferences section at the beginning of the game, "...two stripes on it The base..." there's a period missing right before "The".

- "You slam into the ground face first.", "It's a sharp, unimiginable pain that abruptly ends." Unimaginable instead of unimiginable.

- ""No?" Papyrus tilts his head.", "You aren't goint to die." Going instead of goint.

- "She falls silent.", "The acridic, sweetly-sour caustic stench..." I think it's acidic instead of acridic? Not too sure tbh D:

- ""Human," Papyrus worriedly greets you.", "...drolls Sans, a venomous sarcatic bite to his words." Sarcastic instead of sarcatic.

Also! Question! I joined your Discord the yesterday. Would you prefer if I kept posting the typos I find here, or should I post them in the Discord channel instead?
As always, thank you very much for the game! Your writing is amazing! <3

Hihi!! Here are the typos I found!!

- "He pulls away to take out something from the pocket of his pants. He holds it out to you.", "You have no doub that Dr. Gaster successfully made the capsule and that it will work."

- "Neither of you are certain.", "His expressoin is dubious, but quickly clears as he puts on a cheerful smile again."

- ""Sop" Sans tells you." On the same page (bad ending #5) I got an error too D:

- "When you awake, you're on a familiar scratchy couch.", "I am sponsoring San's integration into society as a moth."

- "You must have known something like this would happen.", "You reach for San's hand and grasp it."

- "Sans sniffs loudly and steps further in.", ""A beard bubble?" Sans' smile strethces."

- "With only legs, Sans is surprisingly light weight.", "...he was hit in the face with a jelly filled donutthat splattered across him and your back."

- "Sans tastes something sweet on the morning wind.", " He stays hiddden and quiet under the ice as he..."

- The link from Sans' perspective about Doctor Greenberg also has a San's typo.

Dunno if this is a general issue or just my computer, but, when choosing the color of MC's soul, the image doesn't pop up. I chose the purple-grey one. D:

I absolutely love the visual effect of Wingding's siren song. Also omg omg the little orca cursor is so cute

Commenting a bit later than usual! Been a bit busy with college related stuff D: As always, thank you so much for the new chapter.

Typos I found for chapter seven:

- "You adjust your cap and walk across the street.", friend instead of frend in "Frend of the family."

- "You are not detective." There should be an "a" between are and not.

- "The air in the Black Swan feels darker than normal.", "It's scary," Last sentence on that line has an extra quotation mark.

- Page starts with "It's evening, and by the time Detective Peterson leads you to a dinner, it's dark outside." I think it should be diner instead of dinner, but again, english is not my first language so I'm not sure. D:

- On the same page, there should be a comma in "What did you see Robert?" I think??

- Page starts with what the MC chose to be their giveaway that danger is near. (In my case, it's "You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.") Paragraph starts with "Glassy eyes of dead patrons stare at you.", diner has extra n.

- "Quiet." Paragraph starts with "You move into his booth", not instead of nto.

I also ran into a little issue?? Every time there was a noun related to my gender, like miss, for example, a little dollar sign would pop up at its left. Not sure if it's just me.

Keep up the good work! It's always such a pleasure to find a new chapter posted, and your incredible writing always makes me really get into the story. Again, thank you so much. :)

Found a couple of typos in the new bonus scenes.
In the Sans + Gaster bonus scene:
Page starts with "If asked, Wingding would freely admit that he loves his brothers."
Line is "Nonsense. Inane gibberish." Insane instead of inane :D

In Asriel's Judgement Hall scene:
"As soon as Asriel ensured his beloved MC was asleep, he calmly walked away."
Line starts with "Wingding, who was seated at his desk", Asriel instead of Ariel.

Thank you for these little updates!! Please remember to take breaks!

For the ones who don't know, you get points by staying in the middle of the screen. +100 in middle, +10 in the sides, and +1 in the edge of the screen.

Hihi! I was replaying this and noticed that, in the Judgement Hall in Sans route, it says San's instead of Sans in the options after hugging him.

Hihi! Once more, thank you for the update! <3

I only found a couple of typos this time. 

- I have no idea if this is new or not, but when checking the "Darling You" interface, at the bottom where it says in which route you are in, sans isn't capitalized in the Sans route.

- "And in walks another skeleton.", third paragraph, should be tiles instead of tile. 

Absolutely loved the food war with Sans and Papyrus + Gaster's appearance later on. As an older sibling and the oldest cousin, I can confirm that is how it feels. Keep up the good work! Remember to take breaks when you need them!

New update!! New chapter!! Yippee!!!
I was literally just browsing through itch.io rn looking for interesting games and thinking about when would this one get updated when the notification popped up lmao

Here's the typos I found!

- "Robert Haufer holds out a large bronze key." The typo is at the very last line you have yo click to go forward, your instead of you.

- "Wingding returns home in the early hours of Monday morning." Third line, brother instead of broter.

- "That tension in the air is thick.", "You had to learn to feed yourself and your brother, after all" is missing a period at the end.

As always, thank you so much for your wonderful writing! I haven't tried IF: UNDERSWAP yet, but I will when I come back from school tomorrow. :) Remember to take care of yourself properly!
(Also also what pronouns do you use? I keep forgetting to ask you D:)

Grillby route!!! GRILLBY ROUTE!!!!!! tysm for that, we love the funny little fire man <3

It is I, funny typo person!

Typos and stuff I found!!

- Programming bug? You can select to wear cargo pants if you choose "It was an horrible accident" at the start, but you can't if you choose the other option.

- Page starts with "It hurts.", when you're moving through the ruins. In the passage Third paragraph, injuries has an extra s.

- "You leave the kitchen." when the fireplace is on and you leave flowers in the ashes. "This must have been one of their bed's." bed instead of bed's. :D

- "You dream of the house in the cave.", line is "It's been ages since someone held you hand." your instead of you.

- Programming bug #2??? Music from when you were exploring Snowdin stays on even after you died until you get to another page that requires a different track.

- You choose to sit with the dogs in the Snowdin dream. "The largest dog at the table hands you several cards. Their face twists into a funny expression that makes you $happyreaction"

- "As you walk, you pass by an empty sentry station." 
Ketchup instead of ketch up

- "Sans likes to read." (same) At the last paragraph of the page, month has an extra period.

- "Since coming to the underground you've become a light sleeper.", line is "San's face stays static—he is always stuck smiling—but you can feel that he's distressed." Sans instead of San's.

- "Spending time with Sans becomes as easy as breathing.", when talking about Asgore it's gardening instead of garden.

- "You wake up with Sans beside you. " Again, San's instead of Sans when the you see the menu box for the first time.

- The programming errors when meeting Toriel after the reset, but I think someone else already posted the screenshots of them.

THE DREAM AT SNOWDIN??? PAPYRUS' GRAVE?? SANS TALKING ABOUT EVERYONE? I WANTED TO CRY. ))):

Funny little puns made me giggle. Really appreciated. You are forgiven for the events listed above. :D

Wonderful game, wonderful writing. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much <3

Hihi!! Nice to see you again! Hope you had a nice week!!
Typos I found for chapter 4:

- Page starts with "You squint at what you have done." When choosing why you want to paint your nails, there's a bunch of options that seem incomplete. "You like to stay up to date with the trends. You are decently popular despite your", "You have little desire to be". There's a period missing at the end of the "You don't want to stand out" option as well.

- Same page, passage starts with "The girls at school have pristine nails. " In the last line, it's your instead of you're.

- Page starts with "You enter the Black Swan." I think it's were instead of are in the "You sometimes wish there are windows in the Black Swan" but I'm not sure tbh. English is not my first language so I struggle a bit with grammar sometimes D:

OMG SANS' DATE GOT ME GIGGLING AND STUFF LIKE YOU HAVE NO IDEA. Wonderful chapter, as always! Also, good luck with making your game!! <3

I hope you're doing well today! Thank you so much for the wonderful update! The typos I found for chapter 3 so far:

- Page starts with "Lawrence makes a tired noise when he comes home." Later on, there's a period missing in the "You giggle" line. I found the same mistake a bit later on, in the "You giggle You'd love to. Would he have time for it?" line.

- Page starts with "You can't do anything. Stop. Walk away." after you choose to help the old man. In the line "The protection fee is useless, desparate instead of desperate.

- Not sure if it's a typo or intentional, but writing it down here just in case. "The streets are empty outside your apartment." page, when meeting Wingding. When the mc looks up at him, the option you chose to represent when you're feeling danger repeats twice. In my case, it looks like
"You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.

You slowly raise your gaze up.

You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.".

That would be all! Again, thank you so much for the update! <3

No problem! I'll keep an eye out for any other typos I find. Remember to take breaks!

Hello, it is I, funny typo person
Typos I caught on chapter 2! (I'm on the Sans route)
- Page starts with "The bell chimes when you enter the shop.", women instead of woman in "The owner is an elderly women who goes by the name Daisy."

- Page starts with "It's rich. Strong." You're instead of your in the "Okay, your call. Drink some water" line. A bit later, when selecting your favorite treat, there's applie pie instead of apple pie, and in the same line discont instead of discount.

- Appearance updated page after leaving the flower shop, sans instead of Sans.

Wonderful update today! 

Found a little typo!:D First page of the first chapter, fourth paragraph. It starts with "It's not the only issue with your apartment.". Window is missing the last w! 

I was just finished with the CORE when you updated the game, so it was a really nice surprise! I absolutely loved the Judgement Hall. I've been having a bit of a rough day as well, but you made it so much better. Thank you so much! I hope whatever situation you are going through right now gets better soon. Keep your head up! <3

OH MY GOD YOU CAN PET YOUR CAT.